DioShiba's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slugg Dogg to the wrld]

I might not get it but I can't deny it's meme magic.

[Starfire]

Okay this is genuinely badass

[BRAWL 5.0 (Commission Art)]

Thanks doc

[Terminator 2: Judgement Day (Fan Art)]

Well the composition is strong, that is a plus.

But the use of line tools and shape tools kind of feel a bit too obvious. Many of the critiques from before still apply.

PizzaPasta100 responds:

Well thank you so much for telling me!

The reason why I draw using lines is because my hand is very shaky when drawing with a mouse which is why I've been wanting a drawing tablet so that I can draw without having shaky lines or too straight of lines.

Still, thanks for telling me! Glad you like it. :)

[Launch]

She was in Z's filler during the Vegeta arc. Would have been more interesting to have her in the Freiza arc and literally steal everyone's weapons.

[Rose Skull Re-imagined]

This is awesome.

Surprised it doesnt have more favs

ericinprogress responds:

Much appreciated. I just posted this and it was the middle of the day, so it'll take time.

[Happy birthday ghost princess]

Perona is the best character imho

[Riku And Tessa (OCs By Slipnum)]

To build off what I said in the thread you have made in particular about whether or not this piece is worth scouting. I'm going to point out where the fundamentals are lacking here.

In addition to what people have said about how relying on the shape and line tools make this feel inorganic, it feels like the light sources are too inconsistent making the shading feel like its all over the place, rather than keeping the shading contained it feels like its bleeding past the line art making it feel more dirty looking than clean, especially on the male character. (This also seems to be a pattern with your other work) Speaking of whom why is there anti-aliasing on his tattoo?

More importantly, the contrast between the highlights and the base color for the skin is WAY TOO SUBTLE to be noticable on first glance and until the viewer squints closely at it no one is going to notice either on their phone or desktop.

Those are just few of the things I'm noticing in specifc. If you ask me I think you are trying to do some more advance stuff that is not working in your favor because you don't totally understand how to approach the techniques without the proper skill needed to make effective use of them. Its just not that impressive nor do I think that I can give this anywhere above the rating I can give it on those grounds.

PizzaPasta100 responds:

Ok. Thanks for telling me.

[Mario Vs. Fat Bastard!]

Okay this is actually brilliant.

Idk why but it is.

[From the window]

Honestly its pretty amazing to see how your art style has grown! Keep up the good work.