DioShiba's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Terminator 2: Judgement Day (Fan Art)]

Well the composition is strong, that is a plus.

But the use of line tools and shape tools kind of feel a bit too obvious. Many of the critiques from before still apply.

PizzaPasta100 responds:

Well thank you so much for telling me!

The reason why I draw using lines is because my hand is very shaky when drawing with a mouse which is why I've been wanting a drawing tablet so that I can draw without having shaky lines or too straight of lines.

Still, thanks for telling me! Glad you like it. :)

[Rose Skull Re-imagined]

This is awesome.

Surprised it doesnt have more favs

ericinprogress responds:

Much appreciated. I just posted this and it was the middle of the day, so it'll take time.

[Riku And Tessa (OCs By Slipnum)]

To build off what I said in the thread you have made in particular about whether or not this piece is worth scouting. I'm going to point out where the fundamentals are lacking here.

In addition to what people have said about how relying on the shape and line tools make this feel inorganic, it feels like the light sources are too inconsistent making the shading feel like its all over the place, rather than keeping the shading contained it feels like its bleeding past the line art making it feel more dirty looking than clean, especially on the male character. (This also seems to be a pattern with your other work) Speaking of whom why is there anti-aliasing on his tattoo?

More importantly, the contrast between the highlights and the base color for the skin is WAY TOO SUBTLE to be noticable on first glance and until the viewer squints closely at it no one is going to notice either on their phone or desktop.

Those are just few of the things I'm noticing in specifc. If you ask me I think you are trying to do some more advance stuff that is not working in your favor because you don't totally understand how to approach the techniques without the proper skill needed to make effective use of them. Its just not that impressive nor do I think that I can give this anywhere above the rating I can give it on those grounds.

PizzaPasta100 responds:

Ok. Thanks for telling me.

[That Mario Movie]

Been planning on watching this at some point

WLCSoft responds:

It's an interesting movie.

[The WADman!]

I think for the time, I'd like to see you do more work like this and learn how to do things more free hand. You're on to something here.

SuperNaturalBoden responds:

D'awww, you're too kind

[It's A Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad Black Friday!]

This is a mood

Carcitypilot31 responds:

I couldn't agree more!

[Reconstitution's proscribed. Prepare your gloves.]

I don't know when Freddy Freaker got this epic but I love it.

BaronKexana responds:

freddyfreaker? i barely know her

[Target eliminated]

Congrats on the frontpage!

SamuraiKNOX responds:

thank you, it warms my heart :)

[Shuckle gijinka]

I really like how this turned out. Feels more wholesome aesthetic wise and it just makes me appreciate the work that went into this.

Yolkbyte responds:

thanks I thought about yours in about a minute and a half so that’s why it’s so fucking stupid

[Hoe mar feels resentment]

4 de great homar

EctoSludge responds:

I would eat doughnuts off of his toes