DioShiba's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[making of the super mario world drawing]

Well, at least you provided the process.

My apologies jumping the gun. That one is on me. (P.S. you can always edit your original post. Just saying)

DrawReese2News responds:

I know, thanks for apologizing

[Executable M Character Portrait/ Exe clash art/ i need to sleep]

I ADORE what you have done with this.

[Bobnface Animation Sprite/ i love bob hes such an amazing guy/ i finished my ice cream :(]

You do have something going for you. I will give you my honest opinion because I want to see you go somewhere with your art.

I'm not totally impressed per-say but what does draw me into this is how you were able to utilize the expression for each pose and make him feel like he is giving different expressions and give an unsettling feeling to him. That's what draws me.

The reason why I'm not all that psyched about it however is because it is very unfinished. You have the qualities in your work to do something unique and I encourage you to go further with that quality you have in this piece but I would also urge you to put the time and polish into your work.

StephanieDigits responds:

Omg ty so much for u comment I really appreciate your comment.

i did this animation long time ago and was one of the first fnf animations i made, this i will be uploaded and gonna have a new cool sprite made by me :3.

when i finished i will upload it here probl, anyways still ty so much, i improved a lot since that sprite i made!

[Green Hoody]

I like what you are doing here.

Keep experimenting with the dithering and the line work.

[Remade my old sprite]

This is a massive improvement over your first one. I think you have every reason to be happy about that.

[Jett Speed]

Do more.

PapperDapper responds:

okie dokie

[punkass]

I've seen worse use of color. It doesn't contrast between them sure, BUT it's not an eye sore and that's where you're selling yourself short by saying that they are shitty.

This is good. My advice is to really learn color theory and understand how you can use them to your advantage.

funnyman87 responds:

thanks

[Drum & Bass (not a song)]

Now the simplicity behind this I like.

[02 (reupload)]

While I like what you did with the composition for Zero-Two, the dithering on him without any shading on the halo is very distracting for me to fully enjoy this.

Its not bad, but it could be better.

[Girl Hypnotized]

Alright, you got a good sense of design here.