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While I do appreciate the abstract animation. I do think that for what it is there is some more that is left to be desired

What I would encourage you to do is to keep experimenting like this and come up with an abstract animation that is a bit longer. Put it to some music. There are abstract animations and artworks out there that you could study and take inspiration from in order to come up with your ideas. Pictures of Nothing by Kirk Varnedoe will also have some good pointers on the abstract as well that are worth referencing to apply here.

Other than that, this is good experimentation, but more is to be desired.

kellymausu responds:

thank you for your response and critique, i kinda watch a lot of animation but only recently discovered the fundamentals of animation

[PSG: Stocking Got Pudding]

Yeah this works. It's close enough to the show's humor given we're talking about two anime bitches who happen to be fallen angels trying to get back into heaven.

[Laura and Ralph's Big Day Out]

Ohhhh man, Laura got off lucky. For all her obliviousness though she's got her heart in the right place but man.... She got off lucky.

[FLCL Reanimated - Summer Takeover Teaser]

This is something that I wish I knew about.

This is insanely badass.

[Working out in 100 degree weather]

Honestly the expressions on the rabbit along with the voice actually sells this pretty well.

[C'mon Down to Friendly Floyd's!]

Been meaning to rate this.

Awesome work. I don't exactly remember this like other people do but honestly I've always appreciated your style of work.

Izzi8bit responds:

I appreciate you.

[Rugrats Incredible ANIMATED]

Lol what?

[Epic Kiss #30]

This restored my faith in h0m4n1ty

Many thanks Pic0nj0

[PIG]

Okay this is probably the best thing I've seen out of here.

Dude seriously submit this over to GLAS and OIAF because I can see this getting a few awards if not a showing at the very least.