I don't even know where to begin here.
This works perfectly. And if I'm being honest knowing Danny Antounucci's work I am convinced that this would be close enough to a different Ed, Edd, n Eddy had the same vibe as Brother's Grunt (Which, if I'm being honest your interpretation of the eds and the nature of the plot really hit that weird bizarre nature of the latter show.)
This is perfection, not in regard to the plot or anything like that but the humor I feel like stems from being aware of the history of the animator.